Much better Jack. A well focused response showing clear awareness of who your audience is. I might add in a few details on the sort of apps he might use and why. It might be worth considering where they get their news on music and upcoming artists from too.
Much better Jack. A well focused response showing clear awareness of who your audience is. I might add in a few details on the sort of apps he might use and why. It might be worth considering where they get their news on music and upcoming artists from too.
ReplyDeleteWell done.
Low level 4.